http://jamigold.com/2017/08/dont-believe-these-writing-myths-part-one-guest-jeff-lyons/ Myth 10: Show don't Tell... I've been guilty of using repeating this myth.... but clearly, anyone with enough creative juices to write a story/book/etc. would know that there are times and places that you absolutely have to tell something. I don't think anyone really buys into this one. If someone is pregnant in a… Continue reading Interesting article on writing myths….
Todd and Ray were in separate cells so they couldn’t talk but they weren’t alone. Vernon had chosen their cells for maximum effect and Turi couldn’t help but smile at the arrangement and the inhabitants of the cell. On one side of Ray’s cell was an overly friendly Muridae named Andy. Muridae were part of… Continue reading Still writing!! 🙂 Another excerpt 🙂
“I’ll be fine, we heal fast.” Turi pressed a handtowel against his shoulder. “It’s barely a scratch.” “You said you were okay.” Ignoring her own pain, Shiloh hobbled into the bathroom to help. Thanks to her brothers' many escapades she wasn’t squeamish about blood. “When you’re bleeding all over my bathroom that’s more than a… Continue reading Still writing! And now… A short excerpt:
Okay, the other one was getting long... here's the rest of it. Sis... We're stressing out; she got sick and they postponed her surgery multiple times. I want to be there for her, but there's good news. They don't think it's cancer.... the surgery will only take a couple of hours and she'll be headed… Continue reading update continued:
I know I've been MIA for a few months, here's what's been going on. Sis came to visit in Jan, her eye looked swollen like it was sticking out of the socket and wrong. My mother and I insisted she get it checked out. She finally did and after a month or two of testing, (May)… Continue reading A quick catch up: part 1
“All right Glen; let her out.” Ron handed the keys to Glen. “If she tries anything tranq’ her, and maybe I’ll let you have some fun with her.” Shiloh felt the tension in the air as she crawled out of the cage and straightened up. Everyone expected that if something was going to happen, it… Continue reading An excerpt from my rewrite:
First off... no one panic, I'm not suicidal. Yes, I get down and feel like wtf is the point at times. I hate having to work when I know life is short and I'm not happy at my job and I keep thinking.. no one cares. If I died tomorrow, there'd be some poor schmuck… Continue reading Suicide… 4 words: Listen, I need help!